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English: editing and proofreading
Editing questions ask you to spot and fix an error in a sentence or short passage. Good proofreaders read slowly and check each sentence for one type of error at a time.
What is tested
- Spotting errors in agreement, tense and word choice
- Fixing punctuation and homophone mistakes
- Correcting a sentence without introducing a new error
Worked example
Which sentence has an error? (1) I should have asked sooner. (2) I should of asked sooner. (3) They're leaving now. (4) It's raining again.
- Check each sentence in turn.
- 'Should of' is wrong: the contraction is 'should've' (should have).
- The other three are correct.
Answer: Sentence 2
Exam-day checklist
- Read one sentence at a time, aloud in your head.
- Check for each error type: agreement, tense, apostrophes, homophones.
- After fixing, reread the whole sentence for new errors.
- Do not change what is already correct.
Common mistakes
- Fixing one word and creating a new error.
- Missing errors because the sentence 'sounds right'.
- Over-editing correct sentences.
Try it yourself
1. Fix: 'Their going to the cinema after lunch.'
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They're going to the cinema after lunch.
'They're' is the contraction of 'they are'.
2. Fix: 'The team were disappointed when they loses the final.'
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...when they lost the final.
The sentence is in the past tense ('were disappointed'), so the verb must be 'lost'. In British English a collective noun such as 'team' can take a plural verb and 'they' (the team were ... they lost); 'The team was disappointed when it lost' is also correct. Just be consistent within the sentence.
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